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Tuesday, 5 May 2015

Today, I'm posting a story centred around the theme of society and prejudice, it is titled "A sound in the ocean of silence"


A sound in the ocean of silence

She put the finishing touch to the blur of red lipstick decorating her lustrous lips, then uses the make-over brush to highlight the pink mascara on her cheeks. At the age of thirty, she was beginning to feel the impact of her ageing skin. Most of her friends were married with kids but it seemed that cupid had a personal grudge against her, and in consequence had effectively sent every man that came her way packing. These days, she no longer put up the coyness which used to pervade her response to any man who approached her for any reason at all. As the years progressed fewer men bothered with her company, it seemed age had put on dog ears around the edges of her beauty and her attractiveness had gradually waned with each birthday she celebrated. Today, just like every other day within the past three years, she had woken up very optimistic about meeting a man of her dreams who would not engage her in a long ceremonious period of dating but would rather find in her a perfect woman worth marrying within a short period of three months. Over the years she had realised that men were more attracted to what they saw more than what they experienced through the other four senses. Therefore, she had learnt to take appropriate and sometimes extreme steps to appear rather appealing both in facial appearance and in her apparels.


She was scheduled to attend the board meeting of the bank where she had spent the past nine years of her life, gradually rising through the ranks from being a green and inexperienced undergraduate trainee to becoming a full staff upon graduation from the University of Lagos. Over the past few years she had risen to the position of the chief executive of the marketing department, following her unquestionable abilities at reining prime investors and multi-million depositors to the bank. In addition, her strong quest to lead a financially independent lifestyle had been a source of motivation in all her ventures, thereby leading her to attain a track record of successes in her career so far. Suffice to say, all was practically rosy for her except for the fact that she seemed to repel the opposite sex or to put it in more clear terms, no man seemed to find her attractive enough for an amorous relationship to brew. Over the years she had been paying little attention to this small hitch in her rather accelerated climb to eminence, but at the age of thirty, the mirror constantly reminded her of the essence of time and how time waited for no man or woman at that. It seemed that each passing day a new wrinkle appeared on her face; a reminder to the fact that she wasn't getting any younger.

Hello mummy, how are you doing? How about dad and everyone else in Port Harcourt?”, “my daughter, everything is fine o. body dey inside cloth”. An eerie silence ensued between mother and daughter. Kechi could not pretend to be unaware of the real reason why her mum always called by this time of the night. The conversation always ended with a heated argument between mother and daughter over the question of the longevity of her spinsterhood. Her mum continued in a more somber tone, almost as if she was crying “Kechi, why don’t you want to bear me grandchildren before I join my ancestors? I don’t know about you, but I definitely am not getting younger, just this morning, I looked in the mirror and it seemed that the grey on my hair was radically winning the war over the blacks, don’t you want me to see your children before I die?” at this point, Kechi who always felt pained at this barrage of verbal attacks concealed behind the guise of motherly care always tried her best to put up a very tough front. “Kechi, won’t you respond to my question? Or are you now a deaf mute also? My daughter, talk to me, remember I am your mother and will always have your interest at heart. What is the problem? Tell me so we could search for a solution together”, Kechi felt she had had enough for a night, so she replied rather submissively, “Mummy, you know I don’t like all this nagging and bickering. You of all people should understand the fact that I can’t ask myself out, neither can I beg a man to marry me, don’t worry, once any man comes along, you would be the first to know”. Her mother then replied, “Hmm, my daughter, you know why I am saying this, do what you must do because time is no more on your side, all your childhood friends, even Oluchi whom no one ever gave a chance at marriage are all married, before you know it, you would have outgrown the age of childbearing, then you would have denied yourself the joys of motherhood, all because you were chasing a busy career”. Kechi could not understand how her mum always managed to link her current predicament to her banking job, in fact, her present job was one of the best things that had ever happened to her and the family. However, to avoid further motherly verbal battery, she then obliged to give her mum better news within the next six months.

Here she was, four months later, in the middle of high powered executive meeting, surrounded by a host of bachelors. What she never seemed to understand was the reason why none of them ever made an attempt to engage her in a casual chit chat not to talk of asking her out on an elaborate date or even dinner. She began to see some sense in her mother’s statement with regards to her job being a possible impediment in her quest to exit the status of spinsterhood. It was not possible for all these men to be blind at the same time, neither was it rational to assume that the problem was from them, surely, the problem resides within her somewhere  and may probably be so visible that everyone else but her could see it.

Although she could not clearly remember exactly when, but she could still recall something she had once heard from a girlie chit-chat, stating that many men were averse to Career women, with an emphasis on the successful female professionals who had risen to the zenith of their chosen fields of endeavour. According to the lady, whom she could still not clearly remember, men believed such women were usually insubordinate and full of pride, with the chances of them exporting the boss-subordinate relationship from office to the home being very high, more also if their husbands were men of lesser means. Agreeably, although some men can manage a bruised ego, many more would rather their egos were massaged, even if it came at a higher and illogical expense. Little wonder why you find young professionals and business executives picking as low as illiterate wives from the village, while others prefer to go for fresh graduates or undergraduates whom they then domicile as full-time housewives, thereby effectively curbing any chances of them ever attaining the husband’s status in life, or even exceeding it. If she could still recall the story quite clearly, the teller had even given an example of a young rich woman who had to strip her display of sophistication and wealth to the barest level of modesty, until the extent of eschewing her choice sports utility vehicles for worse cars, all in a bid to appear ‘normal’ and thereby making it easier for men to notice her as a mortal rather than as a demi-god.

Kechi, could not understand exactly how a man’s wealth made women flock around him, while a wealthy female on the other hand becomes a repellent to men. The African society seemed to bother little about the perception of the women folk, and to worsen matters, even women themselves were the forerunners in such cases of female oppression and segregation. She could not understand the rationale behind the Ibo culture allotting all the parent’s property to the male children to the detriment of the female child whose only inheritance is described as the husband, even at this, when such a woman becomes widowed early-on in the matrimony, she would be subjected to several dehumanising rituals of shaving her hair, drinking  waters with which her husband’s corpse was washed, swearing from one voodoo grove to the other, whilst her husband’s kinsmen embark on a ferocious contest of who would scavenge the most from the deceased property and wealth, without any recourse whatever to either the welfare of the deceased’s wife or children. How could one explain the trauma most newly-wed brides face at the hands of their mother-in-laws who immediately assume Dracula personae, making life a herculean affair for their son’s wives, sometimes even for as long as fifteen years into the union. Woe betide the woman who does not bear any Children within the first two years of uttering her wedding vows.

Unlike her normal boisterous self, she uttered no word throughout the duration of the meeting. If there was anything at all, she had left with a resolve not to be another drop in the ocean of female silence in an oppressive society, if everyone else kept quiet about this dehumanisation of her gender, then she would be the exception to that ignorant pool of people silenced by society and stereotype. Later that evening, as she sat on the mahogany arm of her living room chair, her head bent over the pages of a thick hard-cover notebook, she opened to its first page and scribbled away in between the white spaces bounded by black horizontal lines,

“I hold my head high like the morning sun breaking through the eastern skies,
My beauty radiant like the million colours of the peacock’s feathers,
Like a lioness in the wild I would protect me and mine,
From hence, the eagles of the sky shall envy my new freedoms,
I would live up to the expectation of the heroin in me,
I would get high on the sweetness of success.
Through the concrete and stone of society’s prejudice,
I would emerge a beautiful red rose,
A thing of honour and pride,
Unbounded by the fetters of oppressive tradition,
I would spread my petals bright,
And savour the tasteful rays of sunlight’s sight,
For my life is but an apple ripe,
That drops from the tree before the wake of night,
The flower,
Whose beauty is not lost in the withering arms of age and time”

Written by Onyeoziri Favour

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